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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Red wine,-- I’m dancing with a phantom. How sweet is life! How sweet is life! Red wine,-- the pleasure came at random and washed away my grief and strife! Another glass and tears are sweet now! Another glass and all seems fine! Red wine,-- I’m feeling so complete now. Red wine,-- again... again, she’s mine! Before my eyes, the world is spinning, Before my eyes, she stands again! Red wine,-- my life is just beginning,-- Red wine,-- my grief is at its end! ------------------ Check out more of my poetry here: http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Woah very nice indeed. I played this to my guitar........very nice. This would make a wonderful song.......bound to go platinum. Anyway very nice poem, I liked it VERY much.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
I agree with dopes... if this were a song, it be a hit! ncie job master... youve really shone bright the last couple posts Jeremy "Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark." - Jeremy Raulinaitis---'Fading Me Away' |
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