Storm Lover (another really short one)

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Storm Lover (another really short one)

Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27

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meet Morgana

0 posted 2001-02-12 10:52 PM

I do not fear the thunder,
I do not fear the wind,
I open my windows
and welcome it in

6.28.00

I am no one if not myself.

Angel of Darkness

Angel in Flight
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since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

1 posted 2001-02-12 11:37 PM

I believe this is a outstanding poem!!!! Simple yet, great depth and meaning put into its small confinements. Library here comes another one get ready.... there you go now!

Life is like a storm, it passes you by without even knowing it~Amanda

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

2 posted 2001-02-13 10:23 AM

name this poem 'Storm's Admirer' or something like that. I believe the words are fine in this poem and the poem itself is wonderful!

Jeremy

"Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark." - Jeremy Raulinaitis---'Fading Me Away'

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-02-13 02:40 PM

I really liked this one. I thought it was great.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-02-13 04:53 PM

with open arms?

well, maybe not

Loving it --- short but meaningful

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

5 posted 2002-03-20 04:02 AM

Ha.... wow. A superbly written short piece here.... you do indeed let them in. Welcome? You welcome them in, but perhaps... would not choose for them to come in the first place? Either way... your strength is evident is this short lil skirt.... er, I mean poem.

~ Titus

My motto... always changing, always improving, living life in veiw of eternity.

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