Teen Poetry #4 |
The Truth |
fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Look closely into this poem to find the secret Valentines message, lol. BTW, I call this style syllabic ordinal. What manner of animal Could go forth From simplicity And into thoughts of self worth, From cave to city? Surely such a creature could Only live in legend. But when I gaze up at the Stars I see man's beginning, not end. But how did we start to wonder About our origins? Why do we wonder while Others just live life in small regions Of thought and mind, not To ever see the legions Of food as subjects For some deep study Of life? |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Sorry but I dont have time to look into the poem! sorry... Very good word usage, although I thought the style was a little broken, nice job! Jeremy "Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark." - Jeremy Raulinaitis---'Fading Me Away' |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Well I didn't find any valentine's message I'm sure someone will show me soon enough. Anyway, good job with the poem, I like it. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well I tried to find the message but couldn't....... I liked the poem though. Good job on this frac. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
All: The valentines message may be found if you count the number of syllables per line. Each line consists of a certain number of syllables. When added to the next line, they form a two digit number. For example, a stanza with a line of six syllables and then one with three syllables would have encoded within it the ordinal value 63. You can decode these to their ASCII characters using a standard ASCII table found in most programmers manuals. It's not a very complex message, but I just thought this would be a cool thing to try. Maybe the military will pick up on it, LOL |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Please delete this one. It's a double reply, sorry bout that [This message has been edited by fractal007 (edited 02-12-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I figured out the message even w/o your explanation j/k it actually drove me i see your questioning our evolution tell me what you find out So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Cool! You got it. The person, who is actually a codename representing the number of letters in her name, is now just a long past crush. It didn't really get anywhere, as I'm mostly a shy person who doesn't really do too well in actively finding dates. The affermentioned person is not here, at least I'm pretty sure she's not. |
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