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Joleen II ((could use a better title...))
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Joleen II ((could use a better title...)) |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
harm inflicted on one's self or others is also against PIP guidelines |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
A decent poem. The format is simple, but you do a nice job of it. Best wishes for the future. ^_^ -Allan When the sun dies, and the earth is thrown off its axis, the two of us will still, at that moment, be thinking of one another. ~~Allan, to Amanda |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
lol, i love your shouts at the end...this was a very good interpretation of how you feel.. nice job bro Jeremy "Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark." - Jeremy Raulinaitis---'Fading Me Away' |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
My god...this is absolute deja vu. I suppose that's why it really hit me profoundly. Great poem.  I hope you work things out. Some advice? Just go with the flow and do what feels right in your heart. If I had done that then I'm sure....well communication is important. I am no one if not myself. Angel of Darkness [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 02-12-2001).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
POA, I liked how this was written too (along with the other one). I hope that things work out however you truely want them to. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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