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REACH HIGHER (my fav of mine so far!!!)
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REACH HIGHER (my fav of mine so far!!!) |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
REACH HIGHER says they!!!! I cant in reply GO FOR THE STARS!!!! But I cant reach the sky? CANTS NOT A WORD!!! I’m unable ok? STOP HOLDING BACK DONT BE AT BAY!!!! I’m jumping I am but the stars I dont see. REACH HIGHER says they!!! But I am reaching... WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS I KNOW YOU CAN FLY???? I am reaching but to you its not high THEN REACH FOR THE MOON!!! What are you trying to say YOU'LL TOUCH THE STARS ALONG THE WAY. I guess I will try THATS BETTER SAYS THEY I reached for the stars I promise I did but I never touch one... I caught one instead. By~Amanda~ [This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
He~y... this one is real neat. I must say, a truly EXCELLENT piece Angel. Probably the best that I have seen from you thus far. Great job! -Allan Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Thank You Allan you made me smile. It makes me very happy to hear you of all people say it is Excellent. I must say its not to bad for a little girl. Thanks again |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
I liked the style.. except capital letters could be overtaken by italics or something not so blatant... great job (fav of yours too) ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Bump* [This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Jeremy yes i know with the letters i just wanted everyone to make sure that they knew it was two different people talking. Which they most likely would have caught on but jut in case i guess. To do anyting LESS then your BEST is to SACRIFICE the GIFT!!! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is wonderful Amanda! What an enchanting poem, and so inspirational ... nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
great job over this! keep it up! ~lotsa luv "Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world" |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Im with Allan here... great work!! Melz!! You can't hurt me anymore than I have hurt myself already... |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
This is a wonderful poem. i agree, probably the best of yours i have seen!!! keep your head up... there's always more to come. ~valerie~ *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This is very interesting. Definitly interesting. The concept of the poem's really cool, and it turns out positive in the end! Nice job! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a very positive poem. I liked it a lot. Good one!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is totally different from any poem I've read A conversation molded to become a poem that takes talent beautiful Angel....it's beautiful I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I thought this was pretty creative, nice job on it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Thank you everyone for your replies. They are greatly appreciated by me, and mean more then you will know. Thanks again ~"Amanda"~ What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda |
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