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Me doesn't have no need for grammar... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Me doesn’t have no need for grammar, mine sentences are fine as is! I has no dreams for written glamour,-- it dreams of having lips her kiss. To have survived tomorrow evening, the heart of her’s would be enough, but now, alone, she, him, is leaving, and one was left, alas, in love. |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
This is such a great poem!!!! I loved it. Keep the wonderful work up. Love always~Amanda Keep searching, we are here, you only have to find us.~ Amanda |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You are suck a good writer. This poem has left me in amazement I think people who don't read this is missing on something great keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Well now I've read it! I think it's cool, nice job  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
WoW diz wuz vary nise. Ah's liekd dis won a lut.....  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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