Teen Poetry #4 |
untitled (any ideas plz) |
pixiechild Junior Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 35 |
U make me happy and u make me sad now sometimes this can be good and bad In this case I don't know not even someone can tell me so What we have confusses me alot whether the feeling is mutual or not That's the part I can't figure out, but tell me..what is our friendship really about? Was it destiny for us to meet or was it just because I friend I need Alot of diffrent thoughts running through my mind, some weird,nice,happy and sad..just about every kind but what troubles me most of all now is our friendship growing? in what way and how? Will we ever be more than just friends or will we have an everlasting love that never ends? Who I ask can answer all my questions, and what is your true intentions? Words and actions differ in every way and it gets more confussig every day Is it your fault I fell in love with u? and if it is I don't want to blame u, to be true, U are everything I ever asked for nothing about my past matters anymore My life and love I want to share with u alone To u and the rest I want to make it known. U know what I feel for u, Maybe someday u know my love is true, Put me out of my confussion any time soon hopefully I find out Friday after noon, Then we shall meet again no longer after that i shall be in vain |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
awww thats sweet. I don't know why sweet comes to mind but it just does. I hope things work out for you and the person this is about. Great poem keep it up. >¶Øʆ< |
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pixiechild Junior Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 35 |
thanks..lol. i hope so too. thank u for reading my work. pix |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Have you asked him what's up? So, what's going in now? he he he -- I'm being nosy well, if you haven't asked, go ask him let us know what happens I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
How about the title: You and me good poem, keep writing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
nicely done here, very sweet. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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