Teen Poetry #4 |
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Hurted once again |
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pixiechild Junior Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 35 |
You felt like a sister to me who helped me be what I am today... a better person in every way Remembering all the fun we had helping eachother through good and bad you shared my tears and my joy listened to me moan about every boy I am hurt in my heart that we are now so far apart Why does it feel so wrong to loose a friendship of so long Maybe cause I was to blind to see what u really meant to me Now I will regret cause a friend like you is hard to get I am truelly sorry if I made you worry but for what it's worth to you I would like our friendship to be true and if there's no friendship anymore then I know it was a bore Think our friendship is lost with our feelings as cost Why is it so hard to accept that I won't change although it's lost...the thought of you will be kept |
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Hi there! This is a good poem, but it is against the guidelines to post more than 3 poems in one day, so this will be locked for a short time. If you or anyone reading this have any questions, feel free to e-mail me. Thanks! ![]() "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
When you feel that something is worth it, or worth fighting for, fight for it good luck So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very nicely done. I liked this tons. Hope to see you post more..... ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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