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Teen Poetry #4

Hurted once again

pixiechild
Junior Member

since 2001-02-02

Posts 35

0 posted 2001-02-11 11:53 AM

You felt like a sister to me
who helped me be
what I am today...
a better person in every way
Remembering all the fun we had
helping eachother through good and bad
you shared my tears and my joy
listened to me moan about every boy

I am hurt in my heart
that we are now so far apart
Why does it feel so wrong
to loose a friendship of so long
Maybe cause I was to blind to see
what u really meant to me
Now I will regret
cause a friend like you is hard to get

I am truelly sorry
if I made you worry
but for what it's worth to you
I would like our friendship to be true
and if there's no friendship anymore
then I know it was a bore
Think our friendship is lost
with our feelings as cost
Why is it so hard to accept
that I won't change
although it's lost...the thought of you will be kept

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

1 posted 2001-02-11 01:18 PM

Hi there! This is a good poem, but it is against the guidelines to post more than 3 poems in one day, so this will be locked for a short time. If you or anyone reading this have any questions, feel free to e-mail me. Thanks!

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-02-13 09:44 AM

When you feel that something is worth it, or worth fighting for, fight for it
good luck

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-02-13 02:22 PM

Very nicely done. I liked this tons. Hope to see you post more.....

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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