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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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They tell you stories, lies of unending love or friendship, tales of yearning, searching for the perfect "other half". Everyone is informed, boys come and go, but, friends are forever. You can't possibly believe that lie, for it has never held truth. Boys may come and go, yet friends are even scarcer, give it up, there is no unending "best friendship" a falsehood told to revive hope after the pain. You should never put all your trust into one person, You should never believe anyone else can fix things, You should never believe in "forever" cause it ended long ago; You should never think you're happiness is unbreakable. "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 02-10-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hmm... there are people who weigh things too heavily on one person, this i will agree with. And it is best to assume that nothing lasts forever. But some things do, even if it is best not to think so. So keep your head high, Jenn. Boys may come and go, as you said, but there will be one to make you truly happy, and when you find him you will know it beyond a shadow of a doubt. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 02-10-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well this is a very negative poem. You must've been going through some bad stuff. ANyway.......I know that you know otherwise than to think this on a hardheaded level.....nice one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I think on many levels. I know there are possiblities of forever friendships... but I also know that most friends hurt one another... and it always ends one way or another. Don't even get me started on relationships... But like I said before... I think on numerous levels, this is just one way to look at things. Thanks for the replies! xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Nothing we have is perfect differences, contrasting personalities This causes all the confusion and hurt but this shouldn't undermine you thoughts on lasting relationships keep you head up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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LoveAll Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 148B'dale, USA |
Like it was said in other replies, this is a very negative poem. I believe that some friendships do last forever, though. Don't let anything ruin a friendship if you can do anything to help it- friends are worth fighting for, the reward is far greater than the potential loss. I agree that you shouldn't put all your trust in one "human" person, but you can put your trust in Jesus. Always remember that. But, good poem. Keep writing your feelings- that is how the best poetry is made. God Bless and Keep Smiling  Stacey The only thing that counts is faith expressing itself through love. ~Gal. 5:6 |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
One thing that's always true even in relationships is nothing lasts forever and the only thing that's constant is change. Even if your friends with someone all your life the relationship will always change over time so it never ends the way it started. Anyways thats a great poem. Keep it up. >¶Øʆ< |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you everyone! Don't worry about me though; I'm going to be just fine! hehe  xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
glad to hear youll be fine... i loved this line: "You should never believe in "forever" cause it ended long ago;" nice job girl! Jeremy "Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark." - Jeremy Raulinaitis---'Fading Me Away' |
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