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I've thought it was you
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I've thought it was you |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Always afraid to commit, laughing at the prospect of marriage. Only one person, forever? Only story-books make that true. Thinking of you as just another distraction, just a fun time to have. Wishing just to ignore feelings, feelings I now know I had. I have liked you, and despised you; wished you gone, then missed you. Hoping to see you, and praying to lose you. Contradicting my heart at every turn. And still I don't know what I need... I've caught a glimpse of myself, taking the white walk down the aisle... I've seen you and I embracing again, And I've thought about what I needed; it was always you. "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 02-10-2001).] |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
wow, that was semi-sad but quite beautiful. I loved it. I hope to see more of your work. >¶Øʆ< |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very sweet poem. I really liked the way you expressed this one. VERY nicely done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Really sweet....lovely expression of feelings and emotions thanks for the read keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This seemed like such an honest look inside someone's feelings. Nice job on the poem! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Same exact damn thing Im going through... WHY DID YOU HAVE TO REMIND ME OF IT!!! just kidding  I loved: "I have liked you, and despised you; wished you gone, then missed you. Hoping to see you, and praying to lose you. Contradicting my heart at every turn." Nice job, one of ur bests Jeremy "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Jeremy!! You scared me...! Are you really going through something like this? Sheeeeesssh... make me worry why don't you. Thank you everyone for your kind words.  xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
*bump*page one i thought this was a... sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet poem!! great job on the poem... i liked it..  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow... this be very old...lol Thanks for your reply! "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Excellent work, Jenn! I'm glad Al bumped it up! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
""" I have liked you, and despised you; wished you gone, then missed you. Hoping to see you, and praying to lose you. Contradicting my heart at every turn. """ That verse was absolutly amazing This was a great poem. I felt every emotion I think you were trying to express. ~Jason |
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