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Hardkore Junior Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 33San DIego, California |
How did we all think Before we knew how to speak Were all our thoughts true? Passion fuels my love Passion becomes consumed by my love Without my love I become passionless |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
This is a great senryu you have writen here!! Thank you for sharing this with us. I just love writing senryus, and it seems to me that you are becoming quite wonderful at writing them. You never know... if you keep practicing you may even become better then ,Allan. It's a wonderful goal we would all like to achieve. Keep posting you are doing great! Keep searching, we are here, you only have to find us.~ Amanda |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
NIcely done here.....proper format this time. Good one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very, very interesting thoughts hmmmm....you've got me really thinking now  great post I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
*Thoughts go around like crazy in Lakewalker's head* Nice job on the senryu, I like it! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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