Teen Poetry #4 |
torture |
eternal_darkone Junior Member
since 2001-02-07
Posts 14 |
I endoure the torture I live through the pain I still have the bruses They won't go away My bones have been broken But I cant feel the pain I dont under stand it All say the same No medicine can cure it It is mine to keep The pain I feel Comes from indeep It comes from the torture And hatred the same The hatred I keep Locked up inside The hatred thats become Harder to hide With each passing day As it grows stronger It tries to make me weak But i con no longer hide it So bide you farwell Is you try to fight it |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nicely done. I'm starting to like you. ^_^ Now GO READ MINE!! lol -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
The way you express your feeling is so clear Your words are so strongly said hope things get better for you keep writing, this can help you rid of the hate I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
NIcely done here. I liked this. You express your emotions very well. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was such an amazing poem...It literally took my breath away...great job! |
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Andrea4writes Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 31Fayetteville, NC USA |
all i can really say is WOW dont know if i want to post if this what i have to compare to that was really awsome.. <3Andrea ~luvs~ Anthony,<3 You only live once so live it to the fullest.. Love comes and goes but friends stay for ever~!~!~!~!~! |
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