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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg 
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Self actualized Heirarchy summits high Cognitive mirage |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
maybe I should crown you the king of senryus. You have mastered this style, and as you keep posting them, I'll be here to keep reading em. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well.......not your best, but better than I'll ever do.....no doubt about that.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Cmon Allan, write some long in-depth poems! Altho this was very good! JeremY "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Jeremy, make a long in-depth poem????? WHAT!!! You need not a long poem to have depth. I beat you all that this senryu has more depth to it then some of the longest peoms ever made. Alot of times a long poem holds no depth what so ever, but a short one may hold something so deep and strong you can not explain it. Wonderful job, Allan. And geat ~depth~ to it. Love always me Keep searching, we are here, you only have to find us.~ Amanda |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Well, all I know is I think it's good  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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