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Hardkore Junior Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 33San DIego, California |
Numb my heart has become Almost lost to me the ability to feel Tired my mind has become After such a long journey Almost nothing has been learned to help it understand Can my soul still go on Hardened my exterior has become Cursed to watch others Achieve so easily what I yearn so passionately to obtain A minor acessory to others To me a vital building block Towards a day when I wake up And I can feel more than pain Passion fuels my love Passion becomes consumed by my love Without my love I become passionless |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Hardkore~ You have opened a side of yourself that I can relate to. I hope that one day I will be happy. Life is so tough and frustrating but eventually it will pass through. Keep your head up. And WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hey, nice job here Hardkore. I really enjoyed this piece. You expressed yourself well. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
It was very good. Im enjoying your poetry a great deal. Its very powerful and real. Regina goes into libary when i wish for you, i wish that could we lie side by side hearts entwined. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this poem. If it was about you being very .........well.......heart broken because you can't have this one certain girl......or a LOVE in general at that.....then I know how you feel. Great job on this one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
love the poem love the style love the wording love it all I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Boy can I relate...Not feeling anything...that sucks...I hope you feel soon...Things will get better, at least that's what they tell me. I trust them. Good luck. ~Carly "Insane people are always sure that they are fine. It is only the sane people who are willing to admit that they are crazy." (Nora Ephron) |
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