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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
Yet agian these tears flow from my mortal eyes. I can't stop this constant stream. Yet agian i have fallen. I have fallen and will keep on falling. Deeper and deeper i go. Until thud i fall back to this place we call reality. Where beauty and looks are rulers. This place where i simply struggle to survive. |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Wonderful piece! Good job |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Very good! I know what it's like to feel like maybe you'll cry forever... good luck!  xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
don't let the notion of beauty rules get in your head that's not true unless it's from within keep your head up and stay strong short but touching poem I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This is wonderful... I know exactly what it means to be falling back into reality. I wrote something myself about it awhile ago. I can really relate to the feeling. You know where to find me if you ever need to talk, katiepoo. ~_^ -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
The length of this ads to it's power, good job of writing this poem  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well don't let the man get you down girl. I mean looks and stuff like that doesn't always rule. Hope all gets better.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Well Im sure we can all relate to struggling a lot. Nice simple words you used, aint nothing wrong with that. Good job... Jeremy "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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the day i tried to live Junior Member
since 2001-02-03
Posts 27the seventh circle |
an exasperated cry for rest in a world filled with heartache... beautiful |
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