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Saying Goodbye to JHS
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Saying Goodbye to JHS |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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Until I make my last journey Down the halls of JHS I’ve learned so much In the past 3 years Not just from the written work But from the experiences In the hallways of JHS I can still remember Getting lost my 1st day In these halls, I’ve met So very many people Including my best friend And the love of my life The one I call my lil brother Sure, I’ll miss it here But I must move on To my next journey. “Yesterday marked the beginning, Tomorrow marks the end, Somewhere in the middle, We all became friends” Click here to see my Sr. pic www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 02-04-2001).] |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Tamma, Wonderfully expressed!!! And I just loved the ending. Great work as always~~~~~~ ~*"Amanda"*~ What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Touching. It made me think of my last time walking in the halls of Junior High School... looking about at all the memories. Although I know that you weren't referring to Junior High. It's nice to take the time to appreciate your surroundings for a last time before leaving. This poem shows a lot of sentiment. Great job, Tamma. Congratulations on your graduation. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 02-03-2001).] |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Tamma, I think this poem was really amazing, I mean I'm going to live this by the end of this year too, and I can imagine how it's going to be. I loved the end, it was really sweet, I think I'm going to print that quote. Well, I hope you keep me coming here and that everything goes fine with you. Your friend, Caz It's been raining since you left me. [This message has been edited by Caz (edited 02-03-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a nice one Tamma. I really do not know what you are going through.....I'm the child of a Colonel in the airforce....I moved around a lot and really never had a concept of ONE PLACE and all that. So my journey to college is no big deal. Just another move.....  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
great poem! you people live such a different life. i finish high school at the end of this year and can't wait!! but i still stay at the same school cause it has high school and college together. |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Its gonna be so hard for me come June...I don't want to have to say "Goodbye" to all my friends that I'm leaving behind. My brothers coming home June 4th, to see me graduate, I graduate June 9, and then June 12th, I'm on a plane to Hawaii. HEHEHE I can't wait...but I still don't want to have to say "Goodbye" to all my friends  www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Memories see what they can do you beautiful poem Tamma One of yur best ones i think keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
library addition... |
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