Teen Poetry #4 |
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One Helluva Week |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV ![]() |
Ok, we all know that I'm dating Justin, a REDNECK . So of course, hes drives a REDNECK Mobile. But this ain't a normal car...It's a '78 primar gray Camaro, with a decal on the windshield, that says, you got it, REDNECK ....Heheh Just thought I'd tell ya bout that...anyways heres my poem: This has been one helluva week Definitely not what I expected As I drifted off to sleep Sunday night When I got home Monday I found out why the phone had rung So late the night before My sisters’ dad had died They’re both in tears While I’m developing A problem of my own I’ve stared to hang out with someone new He’s becoming a friend But they didn’t see it that way “They” told him that I walked out of the cafeteria Holding another guys hand I swear, I wouldn’t do that Then my lil brother Started saying I was pregnant Which I’m definitely not Once things finally calm down They start it again today But it wasn’t his friends this time They knew it was hurting me The words he said were so very damaging But where did he get it from? The only thing Justin and I could think Was Ricky, my ex had said something to him Which he’s very good for, he’s done it before He was calling me a slut, in not so many words Just because I hang out with a lot of guys Almost like he was holding my mistakes From the past against me I’ve learned from them And, I think, I’ve improved myself But either way, it’s not his business Justin was so mad, he clenched his fists Trying not to go off but something tells me There was a reason he left me so early today Could he have fought him @ the “Redneck Mobile"? www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 02-02-2001).] |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
this was really good sounds liek you had quite a busy week i hope everyhting turns out right for ya!! just keep smiling and dont let other ppl's lies get to ya The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Allan Riverwood![]() ![]()
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Heh... keep your chin up. Best of luck. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I hate being accused of things. Especially when they are only half-truths. Or not truths at all. Good luck. ![]() xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hmmmmm....interesting as long as you know these rumors aren't true, keep you head up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hmmmmmmmmm........redneck mobile......that's be a cool title of a movie or a book. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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