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Last night i couldv'e died happy
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Last night i couldv'e died happy |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia 
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~Last night...~ Last night we walked along the beach For his hand, my hand did reach As the sun sank slowly beneath the horizon I looked into his eyes of love, a‘blazin Everything in that moment was just so right The two of us watching the seagulls in flight All that day had been filled with hurts and misunderstandings But now things were worked out and no hurts were remainding We talked through I problems and realised our love was so strong Nothing would, could ever get between our love lasting eternity long We embraced in a hug that lasted what seemed like forever I wish it was forever because I didn’t wanted to let go, never Together we sat under the stars and moon Not wanting to leave anytime soon Even though he tells the words me all the time When he said ‘I love you’ looking into those eyes of mine They really sank in and meant so much At once I had to feel his precious touch Written in a book this moment would look sappy But I knew at that time, I could’ve died happy * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* [This message has been edited by luvnkris (edited 02-01-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
It's so pretty! ^_^ Thanks for bringing a tear to my eye. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a really sweet poem. I liked this one a lot. It's good to see things flowing nicely with you and yer man.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Every relationship has it's ups and downs. It's good too see that you both worked it out. That shows maturity in the relationship. Beautiful thoughts and feelings you have expressed on this piece. That night you didn't die happy, but you lived a new and happier life  thanks for sharingI see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I loved this poem!!!!! It was so good =o) |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Those moments are pure magic, aren't they? You describe them beautifully. Thanks for sharing.  "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Heart=Life Junior Member
since 2001-02-03
Posts 29United Kingdom |
Cool Poem, pretty, just like the photo!!! |
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