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TrueLUV
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-02-02 01:04 AM

To live is to love
To live is to die loving
It takes two to dance
It takes two to romance
It takes two to love
Two different types of love there is
obsession-true love
To live, and love 'till your dying day takes two
To make and break a life of love takes only one
To break a man's soul takes only one
To corrupt a woman's love takes only one
To watch your love fade away as one takes only you as one

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

1 posted 2001-02-02 01:16 AM

It was a bit scattered, or maybe my eyes are weary... considering it's 1am. The thoughts were wonderful, I really enjoyed your oppinions of love

-Jeremy Raulinaitis

"I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.)

anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

2 posted 2001-02-02 01:29 AM

a little scattered i guess as jeremy said
but i enjoyed the post immensly!!!
it's nice to enjoy a poem about love
once in a while..
great work!

"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"

Stephanya
Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 63
Berkshire County~USA~

3 posted 2001-02-02 02:18 AM

Also, a bit scattered here, but nice work though

I'm glad to see someone besides my is writing about love LOL...
from Miss Halmark over here
xoxo

(:*stephani*:)A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end*
XOXO

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

4 posted 2001-02-02 02:54 AM

Some good points here. I wish more people kept this in mind. Good writing. Keep up the good work!

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-02-02 08:21 AM

Yes... some good observations made in here.
This piece was organized nicely. Well done.
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-02-02 04:18 PM

You do have good points on this poem. keep sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

LoveAll
Member

since 2000-05-24

Posts 148
B'dale, USA

7 posted 2001-02-02 09:31 PM

I like this...love is what makes the world turn around. The true love we can find comes from our Heavenly Father who holds us in His hands...Anyway, I love this poem! Keep it up!
God Bless and Keep Smiling

Stacey

The only thing that counts is faith expressing itself through love. ~Gal. 5:6

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2001-02-03 02:01 PM

Very nice on this one. Not your best, but I did like it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

9 posted 2001-02-03 04:52 PM

This was good. I echo the others on how it flowed. Yet I happen to disagree, it doesn't take 2 to love for a lifetime. You can love someone till your dying day, and they may never know. Not smart to do, yet still possible.

xoxo
Jenn

"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia

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