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NeverSayDie
Junior Member

since 2001-01-18

Posts 39
Duluth, MN & Grand Forks ND

0 posted 2001-02-01 10:55 PM

Who?
What?
Where?
When?
Why?
These are the words
that dance through my head
~Who though of this?~~
~What does it mean?~~
~Where does it go?~~
~When does it leave?~~
~~Why??~~

My thoughts change my words
may my words change your heart

May life treat you fairly
To the end from the start

And when you have trouble
Writing a poem

Find a quiet place
Where you are alone

Then think of these words
and may they hit home

And help you my friends
Create a great poem

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

1 posted 2001-02-01 10:58 PM

wow, im gonna add this to my library for inspiration
thanks a lot!

-JDR

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-02-01 11:03 PM

I liked this a LOT! Very nicely done here! I liked it a lot.......wow. Very thoughtful of you to compose this. Shows you care about others. Once again, nicely penned.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

3 posted 2001-02-02 01:34 AM

heh excellent inspiration!!!
this is great..thank you so very
much for posting this!!
great work!

"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"

Stephanya
Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 63
Berkshire County~USA~

4 posted 2001-02-02 02:29 AM

That was so cute...This poem is definitely getting added to my library for the next time I'm stumped

(:*stephani*:)A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end*
XOXO

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

5 posted 2001-02-02 02:48 AM

Great piece. I think it certainly will help to give me good poetry ideas. I believe I shall add this to my library.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

6 posted 2001-02-02 08:38 AM

How to flatter a group of poets?  Simple.  Create an ode to them.  ^_^
Yeah, this poem is good, but I write with a different method than most so it really doesn't apply to me.  ~_^
Nonetheless, great poem.
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

MidnightMaverick
Junior Member

since 2001-01-15

Posts 35
Duluth, MN, USA

7 posted 2001-02-02 12:46 PM

Hmmmm. Thank you for the inspiration. This one shall be added to my library for future inspiring.

-Maverick

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

8 posted 2001-02-02 02:37 PM

This is a beautiful piece, that is sure to give anyone inspiration. No more writer's block!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-02-02 05:12 PM

thanks for the advice

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2001-02-02 06:12 PM

NeverSayDie-
   I love this!  I've been away from the
   forums for awhile, due to computer
   problems, and I'm so glad I got the
   chance to pop my head in here today.
   Very nice writing...and inspiring too.

   smiles,
   vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

11 posted 2001-02-02 08:20 PM

Cool!
This will inspire many of us. Thanks. This thing is so wild.... ain't it!
xoxo
Jenn

"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia

[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 02-02-2001).]

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

12 posted 2001-02-02 08:46 PM

great poem!

~katherine~

Greeneyes617
Member

since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

13 posted 2001-02-02 10:17 PM

Great job. I love it

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

14 posted 2001-02-05 06:10 PM

This is great

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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