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Why do I like you?
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
Why do I like you? I look at you and in your eyes I see What you are and all that you'll be On your face that smile is always there Anyone can see how much you care I see you glance over at me And my heart flutters like butterflies and bees Some ask why I like you for you And I say to them its because I know you like me too No matter what I am or what I'll be You'll always be there for me So when they wonder about me and you I just tell them you plus me makes two |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
That was really good! Keep writing! ~LOVE~ *~*S*T*E*P*H*A*N*I*E*~* *~*Hope is a walking dream*~* *~*Don't take life too seriosly~~~you'll never get out alive*~* |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Aww... this is so sweetly done! The last line especially. Very good, AngelBee, as usual! Keep up the good work. -Allan Would you really want everything that you thrive for, if you could never appreciate it? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wonderful job on this one. The ending was very sweet.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Good job here.  Continue to share with us. xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
seems like someone likes someone real bad he he he lol j/k very sweet poem if i may add keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
thats lovely! i really like the way you write! good luck with the guy, the sounds great! Luv Jo xoxo * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Nie job on this one, i like it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
This is a great poem. I can relate to this very well. Thank you for sharing this with us all, and keep posting! ~*~"Amanda"~*~ What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww this was a cute poem...You tell em gurl !!! LoL |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
it's a really sweet poem. keep it up. it's great you've got someone you care about! ~kate~ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
That was a really nice ending. That kind of reminds me of 2ge+her, you and me equals us! Anyways, I really enjoyed this one, keep sharing. -Jeremy "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I thought your poem was very good. It kind of expresses the way i feel for a guy at school. *s* |
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the day i tried to live Junior Member
since 2001-02-03
Posts 27the seventh circle |
a sweet poem and well-written, but not really my bag... best of luck for you and your beau... |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
thanks for your replies |
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