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In the wake |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Unrequited love, a total shame, yet that which then transforms to anger and hate is far worse, far sadder still Anger fills all their thoughts no real reason why? the pain still grows from unrequited love "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
why do I sense a lot of anger on this piece? you've shared such beautiful sentiments, thoughts, and opinions thanks for the read keep sharing well, i know you do  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I liked it. You punched it right on the money Jenn......Unrequited love...the culprit for so much pain. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Simple, a good message to it. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing, Jenn. And Acire, what IS that thing? ~_~ -Allan Would you really want everything that you thrive for, if you could never appreciate it? |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
this was great!.. despite the content i got a relaxed feeling through the format of the poem.. great job! "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Unrequited love.... it certainly makes my top ten list of crummy things. Nice poem. Much enjoyed  Jason"Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yup, what they said. And great job on the poem  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Jason has got a point. It was a nice poem to say the least. I liked the short lines, they were really easy to read Jeremy "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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