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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
How did the time go by so fast? Why didn't we try to make it last? Our friendship came to a sudden halt I just want you to know That isn't your fault We had our problems Like all friends do But they were just too big For our friendship to live through We were going to be friends Until the very end Or so we always thought We made that promise Before we fought And now that promise seems so far away And there is nothing you can say To make me stay for one more day (Okay Okay I know this isn't very good but i wrote it just for the sake of a post!) *~*Hope is a walking dream*~* *~*Don't take life too seriosly~~~you'll never get out alive*~* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
FOR THE SAKE OF A POST?!?!?!!? haha ok well it wasn't THAT bad......it did express true sentiments about what you are going through. Hope to see MORE! MUCH MORE!!!!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
it was very good actually. i seriously found it very realistic. i think sometimes in our lives we might lose a good friend. regina sin from my lips? O tresspass sweetly urged!give me my sin again! W. Skakespeare |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
Good poem. Keep writing  |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
i agree with dopey when he says "FOR SAKE OF A POST?!?!?!" hehehe this one was quite good. i've seen worse. *L* I hope things work out for the better with friends. and if this doesn't apply to you, anyone else reading this and you say to yourself "oh wow, that's me and my friend" everything will work out for the better. VALERIE *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Once again you've written an awesome poem!! But what is w/ bring all the memroy stuff back up??? I saw her at school today...kinda depressed me...oh well!! But ur poem was great, keep up the awesome work!! Luv ya, ~*~P*R*I*S*C*I*L*L*A~*~ PS~ Call me!!! How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Well I enjoyed this, still. It was good. Writing for the sake of a post? I do it all the time, meself. Nothing to be ashamed of. In fact, a few people could learn a thing or two. *coughLAKEWALKERcough* Oh, pardon me. I've a cold. -Allan Would you really want everything that you thrive for, if you could never appreciate it? |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
haha, sake of a post i found that rather humoroues too dont force out a poem, let it come look for some inspiration but it still was a good poem -JDR |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
just for the sake of a post? hmmmmm......... the poem is really good, im just thinking how much better it would've been if you actually wrote it cause you felt it at that time. I thought this poem was about sweetstuff till i saw her reply...that's good by the way, everyone deserves another chance don't forget that I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
Thanx everyone for your replys!!! I didn't think that "for the sake of a post" was that funny but maybe someone could learn a lesson from me...***coughLAKEWALKERcough*...sry I have a cold too..hehe thanx again everyone *~*Hope is a walking dream*~* *~*Don't take life too seriosly~~~you'll never get out alive*~* |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Sometimes you just have to write it down when you're feeling bad. I hope that you find a way to reconcile this problem. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I thought that this was a very good poem!!! It expressed how you feel and although no one ever wants to believe this...nothing lasts forever...Im sorry that you and your friend grew apart but remember, everything happens for a reason! "The most wonderful thing is when two complete strangers become the best of friends, but its one of the saddest things when the best of friends become two strangers" |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
it's a good poem! ~kate~ |
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