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No One Ever Wants to Be Lonely
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No One Ever Wants to Be Lonely |
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MidnightMaverick Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 35Duluth, MN, USA |
Dancing with your arms around me, I look into your eyes and I see the fire within, a buring passion and desire for a taste of endless love. There's only one thing that will keep us apart and it's a much higher power than either of us can understand. No one ever wants to be lonely, spending night after night in a darkened room with a candle as the only light. I could give you that taste if you only would let me. I'd be willing to hold on to you throughout the night as our bodies dance in the moonlight. No one ever wants to be lonely, crying through the days wishing to be loved by someone else as its meant to be. Standing in the moonlight, your eyes gazing into mine, I feel the power of love washing over us as the winds swirl around bringing us closer together, it's the power of love that draws us together. No one ever wants to be lonely, away from the one they love, the one that's meant to be. I love you, don't leave me all alone. I don't want to be lonely. *Dedicated to Sparticus* |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
you can say that again.. i really loved the emotion you put into this and in the form you wrote it in.. almost ends on a somber note with "i don't want to be lonely" but it adds alot to the poem.. great post! "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Tru dat, no one wants to be lonely. Good poem "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
What a wonderful job on this one! I am left in awe. I loved every word of it. Great job on this one mav. My #1 favorite from you so far.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
cant say ive read you a lot before being alone, well it just sucks nice job on this one -JDR "I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking." |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
wonderful feelings/sentiments i hope you did say this to that special someone thanks for sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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MidnightMaverick Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 35Duluth, MN, USA |
thanks so much for your replies people. it means a lot. -Midnight Maverick [This message has been edited by MidnightMaverick (edited 01-31-2001).] |
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NeverSayDie Junior Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 39Duluth, MN & Grand Forks ND |
nice poem glad to know other people have needs to be wanted keep up the great work |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I love it. The way you wrote it... made you seem so helpless. This is a prime emotion for my own work, so I could really relate. I said this already but... I love it! -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is definitely going in my library. I love the way this is written, the emotions seem so sincere, I'm left in an awe by the poem. Wonderful job, truly. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is beautiful!! I love it! keep it up ~kate~ |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
i like the poem shows a lot thanks for the post somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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