Teen Poetry #4 |
My DaY #1 |
NeverSayDie Junior Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 39Duluth, MN & Grand Forks ND |
How i fell change by day But one thing I know will always stay I will be your friend From now till the end But if this may change may there be no revenge Friends are forever Dates do not last The memories may still hurt me But there always in the past |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
WOW!!! I just love this it is wonderful. I hope you dont mind if i add this to my library so i may look at it once again when i need a spiritual lift. Great poem. Please keep posting and shareing with us all. Love ~Amanda~ What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey nice one here. I liked it and hope to see you post more. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is awesome! |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Good positive poem. "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
very broviliquent straight to the point and it was a pleasure to read please keep posting ~JDR "I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking." |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
well done...great expression of one's feelings. keep posting I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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