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The pain of a man
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The pain of a man |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Darling, baby I lived to love you To hold you dearly, and place no one above you I still don't understand why you flipped on me Changed your entire game around Darn girl you cheated on me Lied straight to my face without an ounce of disgrace Babygirl you gave up heaven just to be in another place When I caught you with the guy All you said was I love you and just denied You even had the nerve to say that I even lied Filled your world with mad drama But never once did I cheat on you with the mami next door Not even in my dream, even their I see you with me I'd never think you'd flip Now it's all over boo Your getting the payback two times harder cause when you flipped I took our daughter farther I couldn't let her be around such and unfaithful mother And let her hear daddy crying the entire night trying to confess that I loved her [This message has been edited by TrueLUV (edited 01-29-2001).] |
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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
Listen hun, I'm sooooooooo sorry for your loss!!! I hope you are okay. We all are here for you. Stay strong! Time heals wounds, poetry passes time! See you around! *Hugs* ~Catherine! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Oh wow........this poem was completely filled with sadness. Is all of this true? Wonderful poetry though, puts a hole in my heart just to read it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Speechless... it's certainly touching my heart. Great work! "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
*crying literally.... I cant really respond to this poem reminds me to much of my past. sorry. All i can say is that we are all here for you and will never stray. Were all part of one hugh family and though our problems may be big or small. WE are here for everyone, For all. *~love Amanda~*~ What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
this pain seems really piercing i hope things sort out for, and i really hope the best nice poem here, it seemed to ease the soul ~JDR "I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
oh wow....I'm speechless right now. I'm not gonna give you any advice about this situation cause i really know nothign about it. But i do can lend an ear if you need someone to talk to...just holler I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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