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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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ok...im sorry im not replying to everyone's ones poetry, im in pain due to a run in with a bullet. so my bestfriend is actually typing all this, ill reply when i feel a tad better. The pain searing through my shoulder, a feeling of a lion's claws, ripping my shoulder apart I did not know your anger for me was so deadly and bitter When he dropped to the ground my dear foe, did you enjoy killing him and then coming after me when i told the world you were a sick person I can feel the blackness covering my body, the redness staining the ground and my shirt Shivering with pain, i feel paralyzed Forgive me dear foe, but i shall not join my friend in the sky regina |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Regi nice one here. I hope you get better and I hope the wound is healing nicely. Good luck!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Regina, Great poem and I ditto dopey" I hope you get better and I hope the wound is healing nicely" I do wish you to feel better very soon. You'll be in my thoughts and prayers for a long time to come. If you ever need someone to talk to I am here for you. Sincerely ~*Amanda*~ What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Your poem shook me up alright... hope you are doing well. "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
wow!! This is awesome!!! hope your feeling better |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
i cant believe some people... whoever did this to you is obviously scum, but i shouldnt assume things i really hope things work out and that you get a lot better as for the poem, it was very powerful.. i hope to read more of this subject, it is very interesting ~JDR "I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking." |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
"my dear foe..." This one term you used was an excellent poem in itself... I love the metaphor "A lion's claws..." seems so powerful. Get well, we miss you! -Allan Would you really want everything that you thrive for, if you could never appreciate it? |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Allan youre back?kewl. thank you for your replies. and Jeremy youre right they are scum. my arm is getting better...yay regina sin from my lips? O tresspass sweetly urged!give me my sin again! W. Skakespeare |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
geez....i thought my broken left wrist was bad i'm sorry to hear this happened to you Ina I'm glad that nothing worse happened to you And it makes me smile to see that no mater what the situation is, broken shoulder or not, you are still here in passions posting that a girl  get well soon I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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