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Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29
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Central Maine

0 posted 2001-06-26 03:48 PM


well, here's the latest, Allan assisted me with it i don't know if i like it or not but i wrote it for my boyfriend...


without you in my life
I don't know what i'd do
don't worry though, I sleep at night,
lost in my dreams of you

time away from you is torture
I miss you constantly
but as soon as I see your face
everything is right to me

your voice can heal my soul
when I feel I can take no more
and just one kiss from you
has the ability to make my heart soar

no one else could ever begin
to make me feel the way you do
it warms my heart just to hear
you say to me, "I love you"

you are so sweet to me
like no one had been in the past
and I pray each and every day
your feelings for me will last

please realize thought
I can sometimes be dumb as well
but brush it off, don't get mad
because it hurts more than I can tell

I care for you so much hun,
never forget that it is true
and also keep in mind
how much I do love you!


-=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=-

© Copyright 2001 Justine - All Rights Reserved
DarkAngelOfTheStars
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 255

1 posted 2001-06-26 06:12 PM


oh my i loved this and i know how you feel....hehe this was awesome and the first one i read from you   hope to see more

one morning you wake up afraid you are going to live

Acies
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2 posted 2001-06-26 07:34 PM


I'm glad to see you posting again Justine.  But if you haven't noticed, teen 5 is up already and this forum will be closed in a couple days.  You should probably repost it there when this forum closes.  You have shown your beautiful ways with words again.  It's been a while since I've read one of your poems and I'm glad to do so again.  Thanks for sharing and I hope to see you in here more.

hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

lonely*soul
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since 2001-04-05
Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)
3 posted 2001-06-26 11:03 PM


i like this alot, very sweet...this is the first poem ive read in a while...and now i member why i cam here soooo much  lol...awsome job

the road to fame is long, and theres no escalator..but dang, ill burn sum calories getting there!  hehe

Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2001-06-27 02:06 AM


Nicely done Justine....good to see a poem by you again.
I enjoyed this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?
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5 posted 2001-06-27 07:17 PM


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TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
6 posted 2001-06-27 08:23 PM


This poem is nice keep up the great work!
  Lauren

Love's Addiction
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 57
all around you
7 posted 2001-06-27 08:30 PM


omg! i liked this alot. awesome job!

I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park

anonymous albert ?
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8 posted 2001-06-28 12:36 PM


since this is a double post...i have closed it...but for those who would like to reply...can do so at teen 5...and...next time doing a re-post after at least "one month"...after the original post...since if not it then become considered  a"double post"..thanks and hope you understand.


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