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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
well, here's the latest, Allan assisted me with it  i don't know if i like it or not but i wrote it for my boyfriend...without you in my life I don't know what i'd do don't worry though, I sleep at night, lost in my dreams of you time away from you is torture I miss you constantly but as soon as I see your face everything is right to me your voice can heal my soul when I feel I can take no more and just one kiss from you has the ability to make my heart soar no one else could ever begin to make me feel the way you do it warms my heart just to hear you say to me, "I love you" you are so sweet to me like no one had been in the past and I pray each and every day your feelings for me will last please realize thought I can sometimes be dumb as well but brush it off, don't get mad because it hurts more than I can tell I care for you so much hun, never forget that it is true and also keep in mind how much I do love you! -=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=- |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
oh my i loved this and i know how you feel....hehe this was awesome and the first one i read from you hope to see moreone morning you wake up afraid you are going to live |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm glad to see you posting again Justine. But if you haven't noticed, teen 5 is up already and this forum will be closed in a couple days. You should probably repost it there when this forum closes. You have shown your beautiful ways with words again. It's been a while since I've read one of your poems and I'm glad to do so again. Thanks for sharing and I hope to see you in here more. hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
i like this alot, very sweet...this is the first poem ive read in a while...and now i member why i cam here soooo much lol...awsome job the road to fame is long, and theres no escalator..but dang, ill burn sum calories getting there! hehe |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done Justine....good to see a poem by you again. I enjoyed this one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
This poem is nice keep up the great work! Lauren |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
omg! i liked this alot. awesome job!  I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
since this is a double post...i have closed it...but for those who would like to reply...can do so at teen 5...and...next time doing a re-post after at least "one month"...after the original post...since if not it then become considered a"double post"..thanks and hope you understand. [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-28-2001).] |
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