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pharon
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

0 posted 2001-01-29 03:27 PM

i wonder what makes me
so afraid of everything;
of life,
of love,
of death,
and everything in between.

       i wonder too much.

i think so much of it is my
lack of trust in anything;
in life,
in love,
in death,
and anything in between.

       i think too much.

i worry that i will never
live,
be loved,
accept death,
or survive the in between.

       i worry just enough
              to keep me sane
                     and alone.

[This message has been edited by pharon (edited 01-29-2001).]

Hallie_Angel
Member

since 2000-12-06

Posts 102

1 posted 2001-01-29 03:46 PM

In between isn't always bad though if you think about it? I have been on one side or the other and that is always good. Or thats what I've experienced in my 14 years. See ya round. Good poem, made me wonder.

~Catherine

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-01-29 04:42 PM

This was great. I liked the ending. Very good job on this. I like how it's written.......very good.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

pharon
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

3 posted 2001-01-29 06:16 PM

thanx for the replies

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

4 posted 2001-01-29 09:41 PM

WOW!!

litle_krazy_poet
Member

since 2001-01-17

Posts 71

5 posted 2001-01-29 10:20 PM

i liked the poem makes me think for what i do and why i do it grate poem keep posting

somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun

anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

6 posted 2001-01-29 10:53 PM

what an amazing writing technique you have!!..i loved the form of the poem..and ofcourse the content...great work

"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-01-30 06:55 PM

inexperience or not knowing actually makes us blind to everything around us, and it's experience that open our eyes. growing up means we haven't really experienced much, and that's what should scare us. In my opinion, being scared is actually good, cause that prevents us from jumping into things. that's why we have a guiding hand we call parents(God willing they're the responsible types), uncles, aunts, grandparents, etc....they're he ones that help us understand what is in store for us

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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