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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Don't be afraid to fly with me I promise one day everything will be alright I never could understand the struggle of this life Growing up always in the mix of the lifes problems Seeing day in and day out another vato getting beat down All for the blood money, All for another female All over the ice their rockin' to the mall Come and fly with me and then you'll understnad why this "nature" keeps my mind at ease when life kicks in My wifey is expecting so I'll be expecting I never thought it would go this way I am 18 and a father to be Sometimes I wish i could fly for free I ask her everyday whether or not she likes to fly with me And I always say don't be afraid to fly with me Just close your eyes and let your soul fly high Just for alittle while as we watch and hope this life would pass us by Hoping that reality of lifes crimes wouldn't come down and just fly with me |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
wow... good lines here i like how you described what is going on nicely written... it certainly portrayed your life very well keep it up ~JDR |
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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
Man you are so true and so real. I can feel your emotions and sometimes I wanna fly too. No one is there though to help me, or to even lift up off the ground. I hope your life turns out all right dude. Keep writing!  ~Catherine |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good job on writing this. Maybe i'm mistaken but i kinda interpreted that yer 18 and a father to be.......is that right? anyway, nice one here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
I appreciate all the replies, the three that replied are the ones I was hoping would reply thanks to all of you and what can I say life is life Gracias mi amigos y amigas |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I know I'm not one of the three you hoped to reply, but I'll reply anyways  "Don't be afraid to fly with me I promise one day everything will be alright" I love this line of reassurance seems like you've seen life's realities and have accepted it's hardships it's nice to see you still look at the positives and not the negatives thanks for the share keep posting I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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