Teen Poetry #4 |
My NeW SoNg:)- EVERYBODY READ!!!,... PLEASE!!! |
Mykels_Angel Junior Member
since 2001-06-25
Posts 38australia |
HeY, ITS ME PRINCESS^SARAH ASSS some you may already know, im the lead singer of a band named willow. and if any of you remember my poem "secrets" well gueess what? YOUR GONNA BE THE LUCKIEST PEEPS TO BE THE FIRST TO HEAR "SECRETS" AS A SONG!!! it goes a lil something like this hut hum *caughs to clear her throat* she stands before the mirror and looks into the glass the make- up that she wears hides the secrets from her past. the way shes been abused is why she cant decide. should she end it all now or keep it all inside. she sees the pictures in her mind the worst is saved for last. she looks at down her fisted hand, and thrusts it through the glass!. shes got secrets locked up inside rattling.. tattling trying to get out shes got secrets locked up inside. rattling.. tattling.. trying to get out. She looks down at her bleeding hand, cracked and bruised all over. she wishes that she could cry but theres no tears left. she remembers the way her boyfriend abused her and left her on the streets, in a city gutter. she remembers how she bled and cries and cries herself to sleep, wishing it was all over. shes got secrets locked up inside, rattling... tattling trying to get out shes got secrets locked up inside. rattling.. tattling... tryiiing to... get out. THERE!!! isnt dat just sooooooooooo coooooooooooool! i reckon its gonna be number 1 i hope you all like it ---sarah ( Ellie L) |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
wow, i really liked this ALOT this was just lovely. I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park |
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Alysia182 Junior Member
since 2001-06-22
Posts 19CT |
Hey, that was an awesome song! I hope you do get number one! Cya! Alysia |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
wow!! i wish we could HEAR it, b/c the lyrics are so incredible that i want the whole experience! Great job! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
She looks down at her bleeding hand, cracked and bruised all over. *pouts*...wheres my mp3???????? this song is awesome sarah!! you did a more then excellent job with it!!!..i hope you do an even better job of singing it!! "Life is not long and boring, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one.....very sad song though....it's a slow one right? I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is very sad. I relaly liked this... I would LOVE to hear a MIDI or MP3 of it. Nice work. --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
Hey! I like this! Hope it does hit # 1! I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
beautiful lyrics, but I do prefer mp3s send my way hint hint hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
wow this was awosme...a really deep song! i wanna hear an mp3... the road to fame is long, and theres no escalator..but dang, ill burn sum calories getting there! hehe |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
awesome song...mp3?..send it to me ...and if not...i hope you make it into a song...this was great!...bye Sarah im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is great, Sarah! So much power behind your words. It'd sound great in a song. When I see you, you'll have to sing it for me. ~AF~ Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!! |
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