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Mykels_Angel
Junior Member

since 2001-06-25

Posts 38
australia

0 posted 2001-06-25 10:33 PM

HeY, ITS ME PRINCESS^SARAH

ASSS some you may already know, im the lead singer of a band named willow. and if any of you remember my poem "secrets" well gueess what?

YOUR GONNA BE THE LUCKIEST PEEPS TO BE THE FIRST TO HEAR "SECRETS" AS A SONG!!!

it goes a lil something like this

hut hum *caughs to clear her throat*

she stands before the mirror
and looks into the glass
the make- up that she wears
hides the secrets from her past.
the way shes been abused
is why she cant decide.
should she end it all now
or keep it all inside.
she sees the pictures in her mind
the worst is saved for last.
she looks at down her fisted hand,
and thrusts it through the glass!.

shes got secrets locked up inside
rattling.. tattling trying to get out
shes got secrets locked up inside.
rattling.. tattling.. trying to get out.

She looks down at her bleeding hand,
cracked and bruised all over.
she wishes that she could cry
but theres no tears left.
she remembers the way her boyfriend abused her
and left her on the streets,
in a city gutter.
she remembers how she bled and cries and cries herself to sleep,
wishing it was all over.

shes got secrets locked up inside,
rattling... tattling
trying to get out
shes got secrets locked up inside.
rattling.. tattling...
tryiiing to... get out.

THERE!!!

isnt dat just sooooooooooo coooooooooooool!

i reckon its gonna be number 1

i hope you all like it

---sarah ( Ellie L)

Love's Addiction
Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 57
all around you

1 posted 2001-06-25 10:42 PM

wow, i really liked this ALOT

this was just lovely.

I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park

Alysia182
Junior Member

since 2001-06-22

Posts 19
CT

2 posted 2001-06-25 10:48 PM

Hey, that was an awesome song! I hope you do get number one! Cya!

Alysia

obscurity of cloud
Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 294
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3 posted 2001-06-25 11:47 PM

wow!! i wish we could HEAR it, b/c the lyrics are so incredible that i want the whole experience! Great job!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2001-06-26 12:21 PM

She looks down at her bleeding hand,
cracked and bruised all over.

*pouts*...wheres my mp3????????
this song is awesome sarah!! you did a more then excellent job with it!!!..i hope you do an even better job of singing it!!

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-06-26 01:09 AM

I liked this one.....very sad song though....it's a slow one right?

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-06-26 10:39 AM

This is very sad. I relaly liked this... I would LOVE to hear a MIDI or MP3 of it. Nice work.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

angel_2401
Member

since 2001-06-12

Posts 131
Cincinnati, OH

7 posted 2001-06-26 12:27 PM

Hey! I like this! Hope it does hit # 1!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

I'm a nobody, nobody is perfect, therefore I'm perfect.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-06-26 07:32 PM

beautiful lyrics, but I do prefer mp3s send my way

hint hint

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lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

9 posted 2001-06-26 11:07 PM

wow this was awosme...a really deep song! i wanna hear an mp3...

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

10 posted 2001-06-27 07:19 PM

awesome song...mp3?..send it to me

...and if not...i hope you make it into a song...this was great!...bye Sarah

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

11 posted 2001-06-29 11:15 AM

This is great, Sarah! So much power behind your words. It'd sound great in a song. When I see you, you'll have to sing it for me.

~AF~

Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!!

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