days together (written at 3am on Saturday morning)

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Teen Poetry #4

days together (written at 3am on Saturday morning)

thedarkangel
Member

since 2001-05-12

Posts 74
~*~the cutest~*~

0 posted 2001-06-23 05:18 AM

If I could put you in a frame
I would draw you smiling
and then put you on display
for all the world to see

Remember the day when
we spent most of the day in bed?
How we kissed and lay together
my left arm draped around your head?

Do you remember the night when
my Dad made us sleep in different beds?
And how early I tiptoed down
and curled up with you in the downstairs bed?

Do you still remember the days when
we spent whole days in the park?
And how no matter how sunburnt we got
we would still sit there and laugh?

Everytime I can't be with you
I just remember your smile.
And everytime I remember one of these days
my life seems more worthwhile.

~*~dan, me loves u. and i'll always find you~*~

do what you do and do it well -ME!!!!

WHiTePoNY
Junior Member

since 2001-06-17

Posts 13
South London. UK

1 posted 2001-06-23 11:42 AM

HEY! I LOVE THIS! ITS ONE OF THE BEST YOU HAVE DONE! CYA SOON LAURA MISS YOU!

DAN xxxXXXxxx

"Push back the square
Now that you need her but you don't
So there you go!
Cause back in school
We are the leaders of it all" - DEFTONES

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-06-23 01:41 PM

This is so sweet. You two don't know how lucky you are to have one another. Nice work.

--Marie

"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising. So this old world must still be spinning ‘round, and I still love you."–James T.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-06-26 12:33 PM

Awww this was one of the sweetest poems I've read here. VERY VERY sweet.....i loved it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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