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Words_of_Glitter
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since 2000-10-25

Posts 90
USA

0 posted 2001-06-21 01:24 PM

He feels so empty without her...
Like he cannot live alone
Wishes she could just forgive him
And return to their home
But he knows that is almost impossible
He has hurt her far too many times
And although he cannot relate
He knows what is going on in her mind
She feels so lonely without him...
Like her heart is empty inside
But she knows that isn't the truth
It's where all her pain resides
Wishes she could just forgive him
But knows that in the corner of her mind
Thoughts will be brought forth
And she will always remember his lies
If only he had another chance
He would love her (and only her)
But life doesn't work like that
There are no chances to start over
If only he had done right the first time
And realized that her love was enough
Their life would pan out perfectly (almost)
And they wouldn't of had to go through this stuff

"Do not marry the one that you can live with. Marry the one you cannot live without."

the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

1 posted 2001-06-21 02:55 PM

well honestly that was really good and oh so true you know what I mean I really liked that so sad but so true and I love your quote

that's the kinda person I'm gonna marry

I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-06-21 09:50 PM

I liked the message to this poem. It's very true.. thanks for sharing this. I enjoyed it quite a bit.

--Marie

"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-06-21 10:18 PM

indeed true message...i think youe xpressed it very well

...hope to see more...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Love's Addiction
Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 57
all around you

4 posted 2001-06-21 11:26 PM

i loved this. it was a great poem.

if love wants me, then it can come find me

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

5 posted 2001-06-22 02:29 AM

I loved this...sadly its so true but an excellent poem on your part....
~Nikki~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-06-22 02:37 AM

Gee yea I been through this. It's so hard on the soul. It really forms up a wall against trusting the other sex for a long time.
Good luck with that.
I felt this poem hit home.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Hill's_Chatabox
Junior Member

since 2001-07-10

Posts 46
USA

7 posted 2001-07-11 11:10 AM

Hey girl!!!! I liked this poem a-lot, WEll I posted my poems, forever and a new called lost soul, but I dont know if the lost soul one is great but ya know.... Well love ya lotts ~Hill~

Shoot for the moon cause if you miss you'll still end up in the *stars*!!!

Chel
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since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

8 posted 2001-07-11 07:24 PM

Hey there,
great piece and very true. Keep up the great work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front."
"You are special and unique in your own way." "Your FAITH is all you need"

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