Teen Poetry #4 |
Confused |
Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Why can't I find, my true feelings? I know I like him, but what now? What will help me, find the answers? Could he help, me find real love? Sensitive and sweet, but strong and harmless. That's what I want, and I found it in him. There's nothing I don't like, about his personality. I love his mellowness, but then he gets hyper. And I like his quality, as a guy also. He's meant for me, and I want him to see that! fall hard, practice harder not to fall |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, This poem is great! I think its really good, past good and great Keep up the great work. Until your next poem -- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
awww that's sweet I have the same situation only with a girl lol so yeah I know that feeling its alll good though I liked the poem peace The rescue I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
yeah i her ya i have the same torture from a guy that won't open his eyes and see! robin I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
i happen to have that prob too! ur not alone!! haha good job w/the poem...hopefully he WILL see...! good luck and good job -ethel- |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
shake him up......tell him how you feel |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I can SO relate to this! This is a hard situation, I know. Nice work... I enjoyed this. Good luck with the situation. --Marie "Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
this was grea. i absolutly loved it. i can relate to this as well. great job here It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. |
good job, enjoyed this very much *×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Great job. I enjoyed this one. *~*Amanda*~* |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
this was a good poem. i liked the read! if love wants me, then it can come find me |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done here. i enjoyed this one! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
I rape goats |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hey sweetie, I know it ain't easy, but don't be in a hurry!! Take it from me......lol....I should know and you know it!!! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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