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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
the touch of a mother a prodding hand on mine, trying to guide the steeringwheel dry, scratchy, annoying the touch of a father on the shoulder, to add emphasis while lecturing me warm, heavy, oppressive the touch of a little sister a fast tap on the arm trying in vain to tell me something i already know quick, hyper, demanding attention the touch of a good friend a short jab to the arm in play, for something i always say light, solid, dependable the touch of a girlfriend a caress across the cheek a light touch to show love smooth, soft, sending tingles down my spine ~this is pretty self explanitory, thought of it while driving, and my mom kept tellin me what to do, while i was driving fine, the rest just fit in. i am blinded by the silence of a breaking heart... i cant see myself |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
 Good poem. But you have me in a very bad mood now. I said thursday  Bel |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
this is a really cute poem. I like it alot!!!!  I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
i liked this...descriptive...good job  |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
your format is very nicely set up. Great job! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice job on teh poem...very self explanatory  ...enjoyed the read...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is very good. I REALLY enjoyed this. The format you used, and the way you described the contrasts in relationships.. very cool. Awesome work.. --Marie "Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this a lot! very well done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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