Teen Poetry #4 |
something's driving me crazy |
Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
If you're always with me, then why do I feel so alone? If you're supposed mean so much to me, why do I feel nothing for you? These feelings are new to me, and I can't make a decision about who I love. You do mean SOMETHING to me, but what? I can't find the answers to my questions, and it's driving me crazy. If you love me, please help. fall hard, practice harder not to fall [This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (edited 06-20-2001).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I hope you can figure out everything that's going on lately, good job of expressing these feelings. "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Don't know what to say. I still don't know why there's so much confusion in the world. I really, really, really felt your emotions in this one. Good job! It'll all get better eventually. Rhonda "Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school." |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
emtional one...i liekd it but i hope everything turns out better ...byeW:ave: im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This one's full of emotion. Nice work. I hope you can sort out these feelings... it doesn't sound like an easy situation. best of luck. --Marie |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
Once again. Groovy If there's a such thing as a Genius, then I'm one. If there's no such thing then I don't care... ~John Lennon |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*sigh* I know all about the craziness. Very well done. You write with such emotion. I love it. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Confusion comes with love hon. and yeppers......it does drive us crazy, but when it's real.....you will know. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
wow, this is a tough situation. Pat on the back to you for being able to write about it so well, though. "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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