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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
this is the deepest pome i ever have written its all about the eternal struggle of good and evil and about how life is horrible and everyone sux.......ok acctually it ios a poem about me being a nut and needing to be locked up for a very long time in a room with padded walls and nice men in white suits  gotta love me, ben redshaw the great out!!you silly silly person you acting odd weirdo nutball and freaky you acting dorkish crazy crazy pumpernickle you acting like a fool crazy me acting insane your a dingleberry yes you i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be. |
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5_sweet_kisses Junior Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 49 |
Coolioz BEN!!! *huggles* still in my yonders eh? haha.. great poem groovy chicken, see you in yahoo  Peeker  [This message has been edited by 5_sweet_kisses (edited 06-20-2001).] |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
LOL. The title of this caught my eye. This is clever, Ben. I enjoyed it  Nice work.--Marie "Imagine a pageant... |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
yes....the title caught my eye too....this was very odd...but odd in a cute way! wel newayz i LOVED it!  goodjob -ethel- |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
man I am not a dingle berry i am a blackberry man and you know the men in the white suits too theyre cool I think well unless they have that needle thing anyways that was a good poem *twitch* um they're coming to take me away ha ha I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
very interesting piece. i liked it and hope to read more. Chel "True friends stab you in the front." |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
uh....... If there's a such thing as a Genius, then I'm one. If there's no such thing then I don't care... ~John Lennon |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I think Moe got my reaction down.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
lol this poem amused me. it reminded me of when my older brother always said "dingleberry" like, six years ago. i wanted to be "cool" like him so i said it too, haha lol. thanks for the read!! hope to see lots and lots more. -fear- "I know the pieces fit cause i watched them fall away"--TooL |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
silly ewok! benny boy me lus you even though yous a nutty boy! omg look now i'm talking like yous all lolz! |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
i have 2 agree with everyone else, the title got my attention. nice job.  fall hard, practice harder not to fall |
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never_a_princess Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 82Show Me the Money |
*hmm* imma hafta say..the title dint catch my 'tention. i saw it was by you, so i clicked. it's that simple. n~e~wayz, it was cute-ish, bennerz. i liked how every second line started with "acting." okay, i'm not gonna get all dissective bout this one cuz it's not too thought-provoking. anyways, hurry and get yo butt online, bo-ee. *hugz* byee. __o0o_Anna_o0o__ *waves* |
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