pengiun and monkey(part one)

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Godsend_1
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since 2001-04-19

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great state of illinois

0 posted 2001-05-28 08:56 PM

again this is all the tummy aches fault

jibber jabber in a tree
monkey all blue is playing
monkey swings far and wide
viewing life with wide eyes

he dances and sings
with all of his heart
he is joyous and glad
cuz he knows a secret....

wiggle waggle on the ice
penguin all purple is playing
penguin sliding far and wide
viewing life with wide eyes

she giggles and chuckles
with all of her heart
she is happy and cheerful
cuz she's got a secret....

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it
to make the world the greatest place is the perfect dream in

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anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-28 08:59 PM

very different...an interetsing read...i enjoyed the poem...keep writing

...?

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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Dopey Dope

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since 2000-08-30

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-05-29 01:50 AM

What's the secret ben?!
I like how you write when yer tummy aches.
Well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

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Sparks, NV

3 posted 2001-05-29 03:09 AM

ben got a tummy ache

i sorry feel better hun.
robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-05-29 08:47 AM

Bens got a broken brain.

jk

Nah this is different. Actually, VERY different. Pieces like this are great. Good on you.

~AF~

Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved."
-Van Kaam

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

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Lurking

5 posted 2001-05-29 11:22 AM

Hehe... I liked this a lot Penguin and Monkies my two favourite animals... anyway good work.
Zu

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

6 posted 2001-05-29 10:51 PM

I really, really enjoyed this, Ben. Profoundly.
This is simply some excellent work. What the symbolism could be is something that I am going to delve into for a very long time.
I love the scene you created here, it was amazingly creative and delightfully zany!
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

never_a_princess
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since 2001-06-09

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Show Me the Money

7 posted 2001-07-10 03:38 PM

Bennerz!! you showed me this a long time ago, and it's kinda old, so i dunno if you'll ever even check it to see this reply, but anyways...haha..i liked it. and yes, i knew there was only one monkey and he was blue last night :P i like the purple penguin and blue monkey characters. lol. heyy! i have one of each of those. *hmm* so, who's the monkey? the penguin? huh huh huh? and what's the secret? :P *hugz* luv ya.
_o0o_Anna_o0o_ *waves*

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Alyssa

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since 2001-05-30

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IM ENGAGED!!!!!

8 posted 2001-07-10 06:00 PM

i know a monkey we all call him Dopey
(or dopey dopesito)
lol

anywayz
i liked this it was different keep posting!!

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