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Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

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0 posted 2001-06-19 05:25 PM

Tears from heaven.

Angel gliding, floating bright,
Shining beacon in the night,
Wandering on her white cloud,
Draped in moonlight flows her shrowd,

Beauty flies from cloud so high,
Lighting up a darkenend sky,
Untouchable from man so frail,
Her heart so pure, her face so pale,

Eyes of passion filled with fear,
Shed a single golden tear,
Rain from heaven, stars at night,
Twinkling in the sky so bright,

A kiss upon her virgin lips,
Hands that flirt with finger tips,
Love so pure it turns to light,
Shining in the dark so bright,

Wings of heaven, beating heart,
Loved her from the very start,
Golden angel, angel wings,
Our love is found as heaven sings,

I wrote this one for someone very special to me, My angel in the night.
Zu

"Death solves all problems, no man, no problem" J.V.Stalin 1918.

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

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1 posted 2001-06-19 05:28 PM

THis is a very sweet poem, Zu. Your words are beautiful.. I'm sure she'll appreciate this. I hope she knows how lucky she is! Nice poem. The rhyme scheme is perfect, and the flow is excellent. These are very beautiful thoughts that you're sharing. I enjoyed this. Nice work.

--Marie

"Imagine a pageant...
In my head the flesh seems thicker,
Sandpaper tears corrode the filth,
And I need you now somehow." --Silverchair

SEA

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with you

2 posted 2001-06-19 06:25 PM

Zu

this is wonderful

angel_2401
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since 2001-06-12

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3 posted 2001-06-19 06:28 PM

That is soooo sweet......

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Acies

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4 posted 2001-06-19 06:31 PM

Who is it for?
the poem makes me wanna know

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Heavens Tears

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5 posted 2001-06-19 06:32 PM

The title caught my attention, and I'm glad it did. This one was sooooo sweet. Whoever you wrote it for is very loved.

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow. I feel kinda sorry for it...

cherish
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swimming in fairy floss...........

6 posted 2001-06-19 10:50 PM

wowwowowow................ok ok...you know that i love this poem already..haha..i didnt even have to read it to know that it was going to be good.....but wait!!!....where's stace?????...ahhhhh...shes going to LOVE this...!!!....beautiful poem andrew....and whats better its for a beautiful person....

...good job on this...i love it..

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2001-06-19 11:00 PM

zu-
wow..this is absolutely beautiful..

such wonderful thoughts you've penned
here for your special someone..

thanks for sharing..

smiles,
~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

anonymous albert ?

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8 posted 2001-06-20 12:46 PM

beautiful poem...very well written...i enjoyed and liked this a LOT!...wonderful job

...hope to see more...bye Marsha

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

stace_co2003
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In a dream world

9 posted 2001-06-20 07:42 AM

Andrew I am still speechless...but, someone special huh? who would that be?
I love reading your work, you are very creative. and I hope you continue to write...

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

Jenn Cirrincione

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10 posted 2001-06-20 01:41 PM

Love is in the air all over the place. This was very cute...you two are so cute.

Jenn

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie.. beside you as you dream, if my heart had wings." Faith Hill

keoni
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11 posted 2001-06-20 01:56 PM

Man, I like this piece Zu. It is very beautiful. If you showed the person you wrote this for I'm sure they were overwhelmed. I liked this alot and am going to keep it in my library. Great job man!
Jon

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MoeRocko
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since 2001-04-25

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12 posted 2001-06-20 02:15 PM

Cool! One of my favorites by you.

"Beautyflies from cloud so high,
Lighting up a darkenend sky,
Untouchable from man so frail,
Her heart so pure, her face so pale"

I liked that part for some reason. Great Post

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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

13 posted 2001-06-20 06:50 PM

dude this rocked! it was so sweet! great job!

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LoneWolf
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14 posted 2001-06-20 07:21 PM

wow this was beautiful. i loved this, great job

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Dopey Dope

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15 posted 2001-06-21 03:40 AM

This was so beautiful Andrew! Amazing poem here. It really impressed me. I loved it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

punkrockerrobin

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16 posted 2001-06-21 09:05 AM

omg this was so awesome! this first time i seen you're pic you're a cute!
robin

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Linc

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17 posted 2001-06-21 09:12 AM

Hey Andrew,

THIS ^ is really good, superb even. This must be my fav. one of your best and it's going into my library! Keep up the wonderful job, until your next masterpiece

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