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My father, mother, and friend (To My Mother On Father's Day)
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My father, mother, and friend (To My Mother On Father's Day) |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA 
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I wish I could change all that causes you pain. I wish I could erase the tears you've shed through these years. Give you the love you lost and have happiness at no cost. No tears, no anger, no sadness give you the love that you miss. Return to you the father of mine without the alcoholic side. Give you all the days without rain. Erase all the moments of pain. I wish I could give you everything and then more, too! To my mother, my friend, and my father the one who has raised me. You are my world. *that what does not kill us makes us stronger!* *Everyone can deal with pain in their own way, some things are just harder than others!* [This message has been edited by Angelwings (edited 06-19-2001).] |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I liked this one alot Angel! I can completely relate...My mother is my best friend, my father, my mother...anything I need her to be. I love her more than anyone. Great job! Keep posting!  [This message has been edited by Spice (edited 06-19-2001).] |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Beautiful poem.....you know what I told you about it in the e-mail. I really loved it and it just goes to show just how sweet and thoughtful you truly are. Wonderful job here. Yer cute too hehe  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, this is a wonderful poem! Very, very nice, I know your mother loved it Keep up the great work. Until your next poem-- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Thank you Spice, It's important to cherish the time with your parents, no matter which one. No matter how many you have. I'm glad to hear that you are close to your mom,too. I think it's only fair if our mothers have to do all the dirty work of a father, they should get some recognition when Father's Day comes around. And thank you for your words and the e-mail, Javier. And thanks Linc as well. Keep up the active writing everyone and good luck in your next posts! *that what does not kill us makes us stronger!* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow. This is a very emotional poem. It's very beautiful. Your words are wonderful... I'm sure she liked this. It's a perfect gift to give her to that special day. You're a talneted writer.. keep sharing all your work with us. Awesome job. --Marie "Imagine a pageant... |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Excellent job as usual..I know your mom loved it alot. It was very beautiful... Love ya Nikki |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
I love this!! it's very good, and I am speechless... I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful poem...i really like dthis throughout...so much meaning behind this...heartfelt and you expressed yourself very well ...enjoyed a lot...bye Chelsea  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Thank you all for your comments. And Good luck in the next writing you do. *that what does not kill us makes us stronger!* |
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