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brittney spears the reubuttal |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
Sorry hallucination I had to lol Awakened in the middle of the night you would wonder what caused such fright I toss and I turn the whole night through I'm sorry I don't know what to do Opps I did it again I messed with your head man I wish I was brain dead brittney and justin, justin and brittney oh my gosh I think their killing me I turn to the page of my favorite book I spot brittney and justin as soon as I look I cover my eyes and run for help but I open my mouth all I can do is yelp Sweaty I'm glad it's over that nightmare I look at the wall all I do is stare then in my head pops that dreadful song its there again and it doesn't belong "cause I want you back" all I can say is ACK I run turn on the television my head starts to split with division it's her face again I must run and hide but it's stuck in my head on the insyde Opps she dead it again she messed with my head I only wish I was brain dead. I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say |
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Dr. Jo-Bizz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 97 |
hey, i really really really like this one jimmy. its clever and witty.. you did a good job. as for hallucination... "don't hate me.. forever..." dr. jo But His word was in my heart |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
Seeming as how I hate Britney and and N'Suc This Poem is great! It flows so well without any pop tunes to bring it down. Next up.... Lets slam the Backstreet Boys! If there's a such thing as a Genius, then I'm one. If there's no such thing then I don't care... ~John Lennon [This message has been edited by Dopey_Dope (edited 06-19-2001).] |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Couldn't have said it better myself.   Bel |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
im lovin it!! yup...i think u perty much said....all of it...yup...good job! ethel |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was nice haha. I liked it. And to Moe's comment, I edited it some of it because a part wasn't appropriate. Anyway keep writing!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
hun this was hilarious! now all ya gotta do iwrite one about how ppl get hurt moshing and punk bands that would be a great poem hahaha! anyways this is like my 5 or 6 day withought sleep and i feel fine haha you can tell by my reply ;uohdghnsogfi ok i had to do that. well anywho talk to ya later babe. oh and jimmy to answer your question you asked me yes i do love you. lata *smooches jimmy* hehehe robin  I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL! |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
ooooooh someone likes the Backstreet Boys! *snickers* If there's a such thing as a Genius, then I'm one. If there's no such thing then I don't care... ~John Lennon |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea...don't diss on my favorite boy band  haha |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
LOL! This is very clever. Hehe.. Thanks for sharing. I needed to put a smile on my face..  --Marie "Imagine a pageant... |
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