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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world 
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When I go to bed at night I often find myself in a dream. This dream gives me so much fright It really is obseen. Nightmares plague my sleep I wake with a sudden jolt sweat from my pores seep my legs under me quickly fold Flying in the air then falling to my death then I see you there I see your declining health. Your skin rotts away I'm left there crying what else can I say? I always feel like dying. ------------------------------------ I've been having this dream repeatedly for a couple of days...and it's always someone I care about.....first it was my brother, then my best friend, then Fractal, then Zu, Dopey, Acire, and then it was Cherish. |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
This was nicely done! Great emotion too...but scary.  RATED R! RATED R! *waves frantically and covers eyes**breathes* I'm okay...I'm okay...anyone who can do THAT to me has talent. hehe.  Anyway, the flow was a bit off, and obscene is spelled wrong (I probably spelled it wrong too) but who cares? SCHOOL IS OVER, YA! Keep posting Stace!  I heard a funny quote once...*scratches head* It went like this... |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Fascinating dream. Perhaps it has something to do with the people you know not turning out to be who you'd expected them to be. I mean, isn't the face often symbolic of the first impression/appearance? Anyhow, loved this poem. Good job.  "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
wow that was a really good poem I liked it. The Rescue in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN) |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work Stace, as usual it was a wonderful read... *hugs* hope u have nice dreams... Zu "Death solves all problems, no man, no problem" J.V.Stalin 1918. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
that was a very good poem |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
Stace, that is good, but if you need to talk about it, know that I am always here. Okay? And that there is an  watching over you!I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
im glad this time it doesnt include me...hehe...just kidding  ...but on the serious side tho  ...i think you did well on expressing this nightmare...im sorry that you go through this cuz...you cant sleep well and when you do...this happens...hope things get better for you ...bye Stace  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You had a dream about me? Was I naked? Tell me about it! I liked the poem though....good job.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I love dreams because i like to find out what things mean in them but nightmares really freak me out..sometimes they like ruin my whole day...oyy!! |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
no Dopes.....u were not naked I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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