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how different/alike we are |
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thedarkangel Member
since 2001-05-12
Posts 74~*~the cutest~*~ |
i play the bass guitar while you just play the air but you can rap like Durst or Dre and i just sit and stare! I paint fairys like an artist while graffiti is your way i write poems that you love to read while you write songs i try to play you're my angel in disguise I love the things you do all i saw before was black now all i see is you. do what you do and do it well -ME!!!! |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work thedarkangel, I really enjoyed the read  Zu |
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WHiTePoNY Junior Member
since 2001-06-17
Posts 13South London. UK |
superb! i loved this one so much! its true im an arse when i rap! love you! xxxXXXxxx |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
that was awesome good job. I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I like this alot dark. Keep postin! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was so sweet. I loved the way you expressed this one with a compare/contrast way of writing. I thought it was wonderful. Nice job on it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Nice work. I really enjoyed this read. Very sweet... Keep sharing your work with us. --Marie "Imagine a pageant... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Awww, so sweet. So simple..and yet so great. Jenn "If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie.. beside you as you dream, if my heart had wings." Faith Hill |
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