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MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

0 posted 2001-06-18 02:01 PM

I loose ten points for being in the right place at the wrong time.
I look right at the facts, they are there
But they leave me blind

So if you see me walking all alone
Don't look back
I'm just on my way back home
There's a train to leave here
this morning, I don't know what I might be on

I look around for a reason to blame this on
But if time makes a difference while we're gone
Tell me so I won't keep rambling on

I don't know just what she wanted
But I supposed it was time to leave
There's a train to leave here
this morning, I don't know what I might be on

If there's a such thing as a Genius, then I'm one. If there's no such thing then I don't care... ~John Lennon

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

1 posted 2001-06-18 02:25 PM

Great work i really enjoyed the read, Keep on sharing

Zu

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-06-18 02:52 PM

good job!...i enjoyed the read

...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

3 posted 2001-06-18 02:59 PM

Why did you guys like it.......?
It makes no sense! Haha

If there's a such thing as a Genius, then I'm one. If there's no such thing then I don't care... ~John Lennon

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-06-18 03:50 PM

I thought it was ok....hehe I won't say it's not your best.....it's ok. I liked it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-06-19 01:59 AM

I enjoyed this! Nice work. Keep sharing all your work with us

--Marie

"Imagine a pageant...
In my head the flesh seems thicker,
Sandpaper tears corrode the filth,
And I need you now somehow." --Silverchair

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

6 posted 2001-06-19 02:48 PM

I thought it made sense, but I guess considering it's me that doesn't count. lol I could make sense out of anything. But anyway, I thought it was good. I always enjoy reading your poems.

P.S.: For your poem that was blocked, the one about women - I agree. And I'm female, so I can say that. Good job with that one too.

"...if you want love you must be love.."
Billy Corgan, Smashing Pumpkins

Freedom comes when you learn to live unafraid.

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