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WHiTePoNY Junior Member
since 2001-06-17
Posts 13South London. UK |
GOOD BAD HAPPY SAD, THEY ALL SAY THAT I AM RAD, BUT WHY DO I THINK I HATE HER DAD? HE SEEMS LIKE A NICE GUY, BUTI CANT LOOK HIM IN THE EYE, I ALWAYS TRY BUY I THINK ILL DIE! HER MUM HAS BEEN NAMED TORVIL, NEVER GREATED BY HER WHEN I RING THE DOORBELL, BUT MY GIRL SAYS SHE THINKS IM SWELL! MNM! NO NOT THE RAPPER, ALL SHE DOES IS TALK AND CHATTER, BUT SHE SEEMS NICE NO MATTER! THE DARK ANGEL IS THE ONE FOR ME, I LOVE IT WHEN SHE KISSESS BEKKI, AND WHEN SHE LAUGHS ALONG WITH ME! [This message has been edited by WHiTePoNY (edited 06-18-2001).] |
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thedarkangel Member
since 2001-05-12
Posts 74~*~the cutest~*~ |
thankyou dan a fantastic description of my family. especially my big gay dad! lol. u daft monkey! me -x- do what you do and do it well -ME!!!! |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
this was very intersting...in a good way |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
different...but nice. im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Who's Bekki? I thought the poem had a nice rythme to it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
Good, different from what I'm used to, but good. I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Good work, I enjoyed the read and a bit different. Zu |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
The rhyme scheme was pretty good... I liked this. Nice work. --Marie "Imagine a pageant... |
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