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Skyfire
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0 posted 2001-06-17 05:11 PM



My poems don't have
My usual flair
Too much confusion
And pain
My rythm's off
And rhyming?
What's that?
I haven't been able
To put aside my hurt
And words just haven't
Let it out
Thanks though,
All of you here.
For not giving up on
Me, though I
Haven't been at my best;
It's been appreciated and I
Hope that I'm back to
My usual self very soon.

Okay, I KNOW that one wasn't even close to my best, but I just wanted to let you all know how much I do appreciate you guys!

--Rhonda

© Copyright 2001 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-17 06:09 PM


Hey,

    I loved this poem   and you are appreciated us too   thanks for the read until your next

        -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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2 posted 2001-06-17 09:25 PM


Well I appreciate you posting nonetheless. I really enjoy your work. So keep it up!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-06-18 04:41 AM


yaaaaaay ur luved! lol kooly poem :-) bye bye
-fear-

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4 posted 2001-06-18 09:23 AM


Great work and we all appreciate you posting.
Zu

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5 posted 2001-06-18 02:33 PM


great job!...and we appreciate your posts...

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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6 posted 2001-06-19 01:24 AM


Aww... very sweet poem.  *hugs* it's okay about your poetry.  Writers have ups and downs.  We still apprectiate your poems just the same    So keep posting.  

--Marie

"Imagine a pageant...
In my head the flesh seems thicker,
Sandpaper tears corrode the filth,
And I need you now somehow." --Silverchair

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