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thedarkangel
Member

since 2001-05-12

Posts 74
~*~the cutest~*~

0 posted 2001-06-17 02:51 PM

    i think i loved you when....
you played with my messed up hair
    i think i loved you when....
you acted like you cared
    i think i loved you when....
i saw your morning smile
    i think i loved you when....
i realised that life was worthwhile
    i think i loved you when....
you helped me see the light
    i think i loved you when....
i realised you were right
    i think i loved you when.....
all i thought about was you
    i think i loved you when.....
you wanted me to stay true

~*~ dan this is my response to YOU/ME. i hope u like it baby. i'll c u tuesday!~*~

tattoos of memories and dead skin on trial for what it's worth it was worth all the while - Green Day

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

1 posted 2001-06-17 03:14 PM

Hey,

STOP! you guys are going to make me cry again

*just read "You/Me" * Well I think the poem is wonderful! Keep up the great work I look forward to seeing more of your great work. Until your next poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

WHiTePoNY
Junior Member

since 2001-06-17

Posts 13
South London. UK

2 posted 2001-06-17 04:50 PM

i love your reply babe! im so lucky to have you! you are as talented as you are good looking! love ya babe! cya on tuesday!
xxxXXXxxxx

"Push back the square
Now that you need her but you don't
So there you go!
Cause back in school
We are the leaders of it all" - DEFTONES

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2001-06-17 04:54 PM

Oh this is so sweet and gooey, and, well, I think I'm going to cry now. I'll just leave now cause I'm getting bitter again!

That was a cool response though!
Rhonda

"Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school."

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

4 posted 2001-06-17 06:30 PM

i don't know, there's just something about it that's so appealing.

- jen

so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3

~*~butterfly~*~
New Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 6
MN

5 posted 2001-06-17 07:17 PM

hey this is good work!! its very simple but yet very genuine and sweet!! i like your taste

i cant wait to read more of your work!!!

"When faced with a challenge look for a way, not a way out."

~kass~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-06-17 09:27 PM

Awwwww such a sweet poem here. I really liked it and it looks like Dan did too.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

7 posted 2001-06-17 10:10 PM

Awwww... now I havta go read YOU/Me...!!! This was really sweet!!

Jenn

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie.. beside you as you dream, if my heart had wings." Faith Hill

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

8 posted 2001-06-19 12:23 PM

This is a really good poem! It's so sweet. You two are very lucky to have each other. Cherish what you have. You never know what could happen in the future. Nice work. I enjoyed it.

--Marie

"Imagine a pageant...
In my head the flesh seems thicker,
Sandpaper tears corrode the filth,
And I need you now somehow." --Silverchair

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