Teen Poetry #4 |
My first kiss |
little_krazy_poet Junior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 41 |
i saw a bunch of my old firends. and when i was there i saw the girl that is in this poem. i came to find out later that she still likes me. and that i still have firends she my friend this is true she is part of our crew we’ve been firends for many years being with her i have no cars no fears but one day we were sitting down just all alone on one around i put my hand over her shoulder and she did the same i just sat and held her she turned to me i turned to her all the while emotions were a stir i felt something grate and i’ll tell you this that, that was... my vary first kiss i saw a bunch of my old firends. and when i was there i saw the girl that is in this poem. i came to find out later that she still likes me. and that i still have firends (any way that was where i wrote this poem and that is why i haven't posted in a while) hope you like it WRITE WHAT YOU FEEL!! AND DON’T LET ANYONE TELL YOU TO DO OTHERWISE |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Nice read Krazy. Keep posting! |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful picture ...i loved the last verses...great job! ...bye im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Awwww! That's so cute! Hehe.. nice post. The picture put in my mind from this is sweet. Good job. Keep posting all your work. --Marie "You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job here.....and congrats on the kiss! I liked this one. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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