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Wood_Stock
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since 2001-05-09

Posts 58
The little yellow

0 posted 2001-06-14 08:39 AM

It's that time of life where the end of highschool is drawing near, and we're supposed to decide on what to do and where to go...
                                           What do we do?
- Crossroads -

The path I've travelled is lost behind,
A future path is hard to find.
I'm at a crossroad, where do I go?
A decision to be made, but what to do, I do not know.

In the maze of life, which road do I take?
How can I tell any more, what is real and what is fake?
What if I go left, when I should've gone right?
What if the wrong choice, turns this day into a dark endless night?

How am I supposed to know, when I've hardly had time to live?
How can I take from this life, when there's nothing there to give?
Will I be able to stand, should I trip and fall?
Will I be able to laugh, in the face of it all?

Can I make a wrong decision, is there some sort of plan?
Will there be someone there, should I need a helping hand?
If I lose the path now, is there some way back?
If I find myself going backwards, can I take the other track?

And still my future is clouded..
I'm sure this is one we can all relate too, no matter what stage of life we are at..

Wood_Stock
(Reflections : The Dark Days & The Bright Lights...  Coming Soon..
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the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

1 posted 2001-06-14 08:51 AM

good write once again yeah been there done that and now I'm coming up on another crossroad a year after graduating lol

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN)

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-06-14 09:10 AM

very good writing! and yes, most will be able to relate to this, in some way.....

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

3 posted 2001-06-15 07:47 PM

I'm suprised hardly anyone has responded! this is really great! keep writing!! oh, and I can't relate yet

I have to get out of hs first.

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

AngelShell
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since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

4 posted 2001-06-16 12:52 PM

This was really good.
I think in some ways everyone will be able to relate to this.

Good write.

~First they tell you, you can’t sleep alone in a strange place, then they tell you, you can’t sleep with somebody else~

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

5 posted 2001-06-16 01:08 AM

I wonder some of the same things, and I'm not even out of High School yet. Good write!

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-06-16 02:19 AM

i liked this poem...the emssage was something everyone questions sometime in their lives...great job onw riting this

...anyways bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-06-17 01:05 AM

Seems like tons of us in passions are graduating this yr and "prepared" to go to college. I could relate to this one.
Well done on it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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