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HiddenSparklez
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0 posted 2001-06-15 01:40 AM


Yes, I am alive... been really busy cuz of Grad and stuff... but i'm tryin' to find time to post and reply... this is about my best friend.  

Remember all those glorious times
We helped each other feel fine
Understand that my heart is full of graditude
Because of you

If I've ever felt sane
Through my young years of pain,
You don't know it, but you were always there
And made me feel like I was cared

I've made a goal to watch over you
Making sure you never have a clue
That each step you take
I'll always be there to wait

Though I've told you tons of times you were my best friend
And you told me the same, from time again
You'll never really know how much I care
That no matter what, I'll always be there

I've lost too many to know your truly lucky when someone cares about you
I've seen too much to know that good people deserve much more
I've endured too much to know people may come and go
But the ones you trust and care about,
Never come back when they're gone

So before you have a chance to lave me
Believe me when I say you're safe in my eyes
That whenever you need my help
I'll always have two hands held out

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

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1 posted 2001-06-15 10:26 AM


this is really wonderful.....I enjoyed this very much!  
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2 posted 2001-06-16 05:40 PM


This was such a beautiful tribute to your best friend. So heartfelt and sweet. Well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Spice
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3 posted 2001-06-16 10:51 PM


Great write her for your friend!

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

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4 posted 2001-06-17 12:54 PM


great tribute...hope you gave this to him/her...i enjoyed ita lot ...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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5 posted 2001-06-22 04:15 PM


Thos are wonderful words said for a friend.  outstanding read. keep sharing

hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

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