Teen Poetry #4 |
Two Hands Held Out |
HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Yes, I am alive... been really busy cuz of Grad and stuff... but i'm tryin' to find time to post and reply... this is about my best friend. Remember all those glorious times We helped each other feel fine Understand that my heart is full of graditude Because of you If I've ever felt sane Through my young years of pain, You don't know it, but you were always there And made me feel like I was cared I've made a goal to watch over you Making sure you never have a clue That each step you take I'll always be there to wait Though I've told you tons of times you were my best friend And you told me the same, from time again You'll never really know how much I care That no matter what, I'll always be there I've lost too many to know your truly lucky when someone cares about you I've seen too much to know that good people deserve much more I've endured too much to know people may come and go But the ones you trust and care about, Never come back when they're gone So before you have a chance to lave me Believe me when I say you're safe in my eyes That whenever you need my help I'll always have two hands held out "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is really wonderful.....I enjoyed this very much! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was such a beautiful tribute to your best friend. So heartfelt and sweet. Well done! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Great write her for your friend! You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great tribute...hope you gave this to him/her...i enjoyed ita lot ...bye im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Thos are wonderful words said for a friend. outstanding read. keep sharing hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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